I thought that was good but it doesn't really involve much of the community. I think that there could be more rolls such as, when R is suggesting a cup of tea and C says no R goes ahead to get it when C chases after him you can see through the eyes of R and in the background you can see terrorist's going into the hole in the wall. R then says they should go back to the hole and when they are either side of it a frag comes out and kills them both? I don't know but it involves more people.

Also i downloaded that spell check thing, did that make any sense?