Results 1 to 15 of 28

Thread: The Hotel

Hybrid View

  1. #1
    Yellow and mellow Calneon's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Location
    Portsmouth
    Posts
    3,488
    Gamer IDs

    Steam ID: 76561197977918917

    Re: The Hotel

    That was actually one of the better ones I read today while having a look, I'll post the actual one here.

    ---

    A young girl is left home alone with only her dog to protect her. When night approaches, she locks all the doors and tries to lock all the windows but one won't close.

    She decides to leave it unlocked and goes to bed. Her dog takes its customary place under her bed.

    In the deep of night she awakens to a dripping sound coming from the bathroom. The girl is too scared to go check so she reaches her hand under the bed. She feels a reassuring lick from her dog and falls back to sleep. She reawakens to the dripping sound, reaches her hand down to the dog where she feels the reassuring lick and falls back to sleep. Once more she awakens to the dripping sound. She reaches her hand down and feels the lick of her dog.

    Now curious about the dripping sound, she gets up and slowly walks towards the bathroom, the dripping sound getting louder as she approaches. She reaches the bathroom and turns on the light. She is greeted by a horrific sight; hanging from the shower nozzle is her dog with its throat slit open and its blood dripping into the bathtub.

    Something on the bathroom mirror catches her eye she turns around. Written on the bathroom mirror in her dog's blood are the words "HUMANS CAN LICK TOO".

    ---

    I think your version missed the whole, 'it wasn't the dog licking you' thing.

    i7 920@3.8 | GTX280 | HAF 932 | 6GB | Corsair 520W
    Hazro 24" | Logitech Illuminated | G500 | Creative 2.0 | Nikon D3100


  2. #2
    Administrator Chalex4's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2007
    Location
    Oxfordshire, UK
    Posts
    2,706
    Gamer IDs

    XFIRE ID: chalex4 Steam ID: chalex4

    Re: The Hotel

    Quote Originally Posted by Phantom View Post
    I think your version missed the whole, 'it wasn't the dog licking you' thing.
    I'd have thought that part could be figured out pretty quickly, but anyway, it was a pretty awesomely odd story lol. None of the excess fluff like the 2nd one on the last page.
    Quote Originally Posted by ez64
    chalex has so much control we control ourselves

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Affiliates: LochTechMonster, Temple Millar, SamBigos, Addenda Provided, Prime Gaming, Petrol Smell, Game Sprays, Afterlife Gaming, L4D MapDB, Brawl Forum

All times are GMT +1. The time now is 05:44 PM. Powered by vBulletin® Version 4.2.2
Copyright © 2025 vBulletin Solutions, Inc. All rights reserved. Copyright Aim to Kill (ATK) 2014