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    Re: The Hotel

    Quote Originally Posted by Phantom View Post
    I think your version missed the whole, 'it wasn't the dog licking you' thing.
    I'd have thought that part could be figured out pretty quickly, but anyway, it was a pretty awesomely odd story lol. None of the excess fluff like the 2nd one on the last page.
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    "In Korea, a lot of students are forced by their parents to do a lot of study and do well academically. It's not uncommon for students to go back to school at night to do extra study.

    One night this girl was back at school studying with a group of students. The room they were in was the only light in the whole building, which dimly flowed down the hallway outside.

    In the middle of her studies, she decided to take a break and went to the toilets down the hall. She proceeded back to her fellow students, when she suddenly heard a bunch of chilling, horrific screams eminating from the clasoom. And just as abruptly as they had started, the building fell deathly quiet once again.

    Fearing the worst, she crept back towards the clasoom making sure not to make a sound. She peered inside the clasoom and lo and behold, all her peers lay strewn across the floor. Limp, lifeless and their faces dashed with blood. Their in the midst of the room was a pale white figure, a ghost of a young girl in a white gown with long black hair that veiled her face.

    The girl had heard of this ghost before. It attacked people in the late hours of the night, harvesting its victims for their eyeballs. The girl could not run without making a sound and attracting the attention of the ghost. Instead, she slipped in the the ****oom and smeared her eyes with blood and lay there amongst the bodies pretending to be dead. She held her eyes shut tight and dared not move, hoping the ghost would soon leave and she could make her escape.

    She could hear the ghost make the rounds through the room, shuffling from one corpse to the next, counting in chilling, soft voice "One, two... One, two... One, two..." as it plucked the eyeballs of the deceased.

    This went on for several minutes, but the girl remained motionless. "One, two... One, two... One, two..." And still the ghost continued to count. The girl became anxious, curious as to why the ghost had not left. But she remained still, knowing what horrific fate might await her if she foiled her plan. But still the ghost continued to count "One, two... One, two..." and curiosity got the better of her. She summoned the courage to take a peak, making sure to remain still whilst she slowly opened her eyes to survey the room...

    And there was the ghost, staring back at her. It's, pale, emaciated finger pointing at the girls' eyes, from one eye to the other as it counted "One, two... One, two... One, two..."

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    Can see it coming a mile off, but still creepy.
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    Re: The Hotel

    Just gone midnight and i cant bring myself to watch the video, i want to sleep peacefully, got 20 seconds in and i see some chinese kid being happy and i somehow feel that its gonna change. Ill try and watch it tomorrow

    My tale was better than your one anyway

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    Re: The Hotel

    Quote Originally Posted by Trigger View Post
    Just gone midnight and i cant bring myself to watch the video, i want to sleep peacefully, got 20 seconds in and i see some chinese kid being happy and i somehow feel that its gonna change. Ill try and watch it tomorrow

    My tale was better than your one anyway
    Heh, i decided a few minutes after posting the video that it was kinda lame and decided to post that story instead. TBH the video wasn't scary at all, i was just looking through japanese ghost sighting videos because i was (very) bored and that was a decent one.

    Also, if anyone wants a creepy movie, i'd recommend The Mothman Prophecies. It's not scary like movies such as The Grudge (ugh hate japanese kid ghost movies ), just very errie and creepy.
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    And is there an alternative movie/story set to cater for those of us who prefer to keep our eyes/hands/dogs?

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    Re: The Hotel

    Quote Originally Posted by D_K_Head View Post
    And is there an alternative movie/story set to cater for those of us who prefer to keep our eyes/hands/dogs?
    Not sure I follow.

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    Re: The Hotel

    you know... more funny, less unnerving?

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    Re: The Hotel

    The whole point of this thread is to tell scary/unnerving/chilling stories. If you want to make a new thread where people can post funny stories then go ahead.

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    Re: The Hotel

    Ok, just wondering. Scary stuff it is.

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    Re: The Hotel

    Deathnote =) Youtube it XD
    Take that ya one-eyed, bomb-lobbin', cactus eatin', pot bellied, thug fat jigglin-chicken whoopin' big, back-stabbin lob-armed creepy spastic bloody, blind-eyed pashy little twitchy pickle-headed rocke- hoppin, potato-poppin' phony two-faced stealthy mutant bastard!


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    Re: The Hotel

    Thats anime, not a written story.
    Awesome story none the less though but id hardly call it chilling or unnerving

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    lol the dog one was quite gud the second version was deffo better :P

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    Re: The Hotel

    No it werent, you dont need it spelt out in big bold letters.

    Bah!

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