Ok, so it's not a sig or an avatar, but there's no graphics forum, I've just realised.

I'm trying to make an opening slide to a little project I'm putting together, called Street Lines.

Now, we all know I'm not 1337 at anything, let alone graphics, but what do you think about my little mess-around with GIMP:



Here's the original file, for you to have a go at doing something cool with it (please ^^)



The feeling of the series(?) is sort of a street drama kind of thing, which I tried to get across on my version of the slide, I'm not sure if that worked, what do you guys think?