Wow it's looking pretty damn awesome now. I'm sure you have a good idea already of what you're going to change, but things that occurred to me are the random chopping off of the tops of letters and the missing piece of thicker black line on the top of the wave.
Design wise, I like the circuit board overlay, but for things like tshirts the digital display version could work better. It's probably too complicated like this. Also, what' the point of the random dotted lines?
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