My own song

[maZe]

I don't normally listen to this type of music but it's ok actually
I see what some people say about to much happening at once in certain parts but overall i like it :P

Something you could have done in the riff between 1 and 2 mins could have been to either add the same riff at a higher pitch echoing the lower bass line or possibly reversing the riff backwards and played it into the background, i'm not sure how well it would blend together but it would add a different element to the song.

Thanks for the ideas man, much appreciated <3