You should check this out

[WIrtex]

I found this guy on youtube and he has some potential, on making some half decent videos and commentating.

[Marshy]

It's you, isn't it.

[Joe]

It's you, isn't it.

^

[Hutch]

This was an example of how not to do a walkthrough.

[Setsoru]

woops

[Kimberly Cook]

I found this guy on youtube and he has some potential, on making some half decent videos and commentating.

What you want to say???? i was not able to understand your question....

[Joe]

It wasn't a question. The videos are obviously made by you.

[LMAOAsylum]

Cmon now, maybe this is one of the loyal 17 subscribers that just want to share his content with the world!? That happens doesn't it? People do nice things for one another right?! Sarcasm dear freinds....

[Chalex4]

Assuming we're right and that's you WIrtex, you should have just said so! We'd be much more open to helping you improve .

In terms of improvements, I watched about 30 seconds of it then got slightly annoyed with the regularity at which you sighed and repeated yourself. Onwards and upwards!